I liked the paper style, looks really fun and playful. I think the sfx could have been a bit better though. Still very nice work!
I liked the paper style, looks really fun and playful. I think the sfx could have been a bit better though. Still very nice work!
I know what you mean about the sound, but it was kind of intentional in a way as I wanted it to sound like a spontaneous voice over. Probably for my next animation I will get someone who is experienced with sfx to do it. For this one I wanted to give it a go myself.
Thank you for watching the animation and for the feedback!
haha that was pretty funny. Also love the little touches such as the used tissues in the BG and the anime ring tone lol
Thanks! I like throwing in those little details
Neat :) love the the classic visual gags
Thanks a lot, glad that you like it.
Very sweet animation, and I like the fast-paced humor in this. The music wasnt that great though, and this couldve been better with SFX. Other than that, I enjoyed it.
tanks
Nice art and animation, but the hallucinations of the man could be a lot more creative.
Yeh I think I would have liked to be a little more ambitious, but in the end I just ran out of time before the deadline. Next time I animate a hallucination I will bear this in mind!
That was painful to watch, as the text was unreadable without stopping the video. Also a lot of the scenes were so fast it made me wonder if they are supposed to be seen at all. Some neat jokes here and there, and nice limited animation style, but bad editing and pacing made me dissapointed.
I appreciate you taking the time to watch! Part of the reason they fly by so fast is because I do want viewers to go back and try to find them afterwards but you're right in that some of them were definitely too fast and needed more exposure to flesh out scenes. I'll try harder in the next one.
I make cartoons and video games. Oh and comics, when I have time.
Age 31, Male
Animator/Illustrator
Tallinn, Estonia
Joined on 6/16/16